Thursday, June 07, 2007

Daydreams and Desires II

Part I here

He moved around her body in a different fashion than she on his. Where she teased and scintillated, she still had a goal. It seemed that he didn't. He meandered down, breathing softly on her skin, before bringing his lips to that spot and applying the most gentle pressure. His lips felt soft and warm on her slightly cooled skin, and left small patches tingling in their wake. He made his way slowly to her nipple, taking as much of the soft, warm tissue into his mouth as he could. She moaned softly, pushing her chest upwards, encouraging him. He pulled away, and came back for more.

Raking his teeth ever so gently across the velvety softness of her nipple, the most exquisite sensations rippled through her. A tinging sensation ran from his mouth, sliding under her skin and spreading outwards rapidly. She gasped. Christ she was almost coming and he hadn't even gone near her pussy.

Her fingers slid up his arm, across the firm muscles of his shoulders to the back of his neck, where they twined in his short, dark hair. She pulled ever so gently, moaning. He stopped nibbling on her nipple, and gave it a quick suck in parting.

Moving further down her soft body, he gently kissed the spot where her ribs met, slowly meandering his way down to her bellybutton. When she couldn't stand his teasing anymore she located his hand on her hip. She laid her hand across his, and using light pressure directed it to her pussy. When he had positioned her hand where she wanted it to be, she squeezed it, forcing him to rub her wet pussy hard. The message was clear - pay attention to the cunt.

He pulled his mouth away from her stomach and looked up at her. She wasn't looking at him. She was staring straight up, back arched. She was definitely beginning to climax. He was still rubbing her, just the way she'd shown him. He could feel her wetness sliding over his palms, even though he hadn't spread her. He gently slipped his fingers between her moist lips and felt upwards. Her clit was easy to find, it was absolutely throbbing. He slid his fingers down again, and moved them inside of her.

Her tight pussy was so damn wet. Two wriggles and his fingers were sliding effortlessly to her most sensitive areas. He could feel the muscles that would later hug his cock beginning to spasm. She moaned. He marveled that he could get a woman like her in such a vulnerable position. Watching her he could see her hands sliding over her body, finally clenching at her breasts. He was sure she was coming. He moved his head down and gave a few tentative flicks with his tongue, tasting her sweetness. She moved her hips up to him, inviting him to take more.

He obliged. Pulling his fingers out of her to give him more room, be buried his face in her cunt. His mouth moved neatly over her clit and he sucked hungrily, flicking with his tongue. She screamed. She had never felt pleasure so sweet and intense. He legs moved up involuntarily either side of his head, and her hips started to gyrate.

She experienced this as an explosion. A series of ripples moved through her body, each more intense than the last. She was taken to another plane. She was vaguely aware that she was making too much noise. She was vaguely aware that she could barely breathe. She could feel him smiling against her pussy. She had no idea how long it lasted, only when he pulled away and began to move up to her again, her breath was coming in shudders.

She started when his voice murmured, soft and husky in her ear.

'Enjoy that babe?'

'Mmmyeah,' came her languid response. She was still coming, but with less intensity.

'I'm just getting started'.

She gave a throaty laugh and looked at him, focusing for the first time since he finished eating her. His pupils were massive, making his normally light green eyes look incredibly dark. He moved in to kiss her and she snorted back a laugh. Moving away slightly he frowned, looking slightly offended.

'You've got my come on your chin,' she whispered, half giggling, slightly apologetic, and 100% turned on. She leaned her head up to him and flicked her tongue out, licking it. He watched as her tongue slowly slipped back into her mouth, before reaching down to kiss her viciously. Tasting her pussy from her own mouth was one of the most unique sexual experiences he had ever had. His cock was harder than before, and he moved his hand down to guide himself into her and bring them together again.

Part 3 here


phishez_rule said...

I have to apologise. I feel that this one is a bit less cohesive than the previous. Its because I've never been in the position to accurately describe going down on a chickie. Maybe one day, but for now thats the best I can do. There will be more.

Crushed by Ingsoc said...

So- does all this mean the seven month famine has ended?

If this is based on reality, then you seem to have interesting experiences...

Chai said...

I dont visit for a while (lost my old bookmarks) and what do I find? Cool (and v hot) erotica. Nicely done.

RAFFI said...

cohesive? just use the mess in my pants to glue it together. a+ job well done. that black, alien-looking eyes thing was cool. the jizm on his chin was a nice touch as well.

Cazzie!!! said...

Damned woman, jus like Bold and The Beautiful, you leave us hangin' in there...ohhhh the suspense, LOL.
Great writing girl... nah, it is cohesive, well done :)

Steph said...

I would leave a comment, but I have to go some washing out rather urgently :P

Natalia said...

Waiting for #3.


phishez_rule said...

Ingsoc - Nobody's brushed away the cobwebs yet. And all of it comes from my brain. Some as memories. Some not. I personally thinks its a bit mundane, just really well written. She goes down, he goes down, they fuck. Is there another way to do it?

Chai - thanks.

Raffi - I love seeing a guys eyes when he's really into it. SO HAWT. And what the hell, we're among friends right? That 'jism bit'... thats real.

Cazzie - the endings not really that much of a surprise.

Steph - is your 'washing line' battery operated?

Natalia - I'll try not to disappoint.

Ms Smack said...

hot damn woman! that was sizzling!

Crushed by Ingsoc said...

'She goes down, he goes down, they fuck. Is there another way to do it?'

The joyless, unromantic, uncaring release of two people who are using eachother for simple gratification.

That's the common reality.

Good luck with the cobwebs. And I hope you find someone nice.

phishez_rule said...

Ms Smack - thanks :)

Ingsoc - It was more a comment about the order to it, rather than the connection or lack thereof. And I'm still young (and stupid) enough to not see it as joyless or uncaring. Then again, I've never been in love, so I haven't experienced any different.

Crushed by Ingsoc said...

Never been in love?

I was at nineteen.
After that I became cynical.

Of course it doesn't have to be joyless and uncaring. It just often is.
Shouldn't be though.

It should be something really beautiful.

phishez_rule said...

I was abused as a kid. So I have trust issues and without trust there is no love.

Crushed by Ingsoc said...

I am truly sorry to hear that. I won't push you further on the subject.

It's sad, because I get the impression you have a lot to give.

My thoughts are with you.

phishez_rule said...

Crushed by Ingsoc said...

Thanks for the perspective.

Sorry if I made you rake that up, it was unintentional.

I really, really, hope you find the love you deserve.

phishez_rule said...

Its not really dredging it up. Its a part of my life. Its past, it has shaped who I am, thus will affect my future. But it doesn't get to me emotionally anymore.

Crushed by Ingsoc said...

As long as you have the ability to find happiness one day, that's what really matters :)

You will find it one day.